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Animation/Drawing: You did very well with this! Plz tell me.. how long does it take to draw one frame? And you have to redraw everything for each frame? Or does your drawing stay there for you to edit, move etc.?

Music: I repeat, Hazzah for rap! XD. And although it has strong lyrics, I guess J-Kellz is supossed to have those in his songs! Aside from that, good voicework.... he's the only rapper on NG I've heard (besides ypu)

Length: Is the song really that short? Or did you use Audacity (or whatnot) to cut out part of the song because you figured it was long enough to release to the public?

ALSO: I meant to review this yesterday, but was too busy :(

Overall:
5/5 ; 10/10
~darknessdweller ;D

Hye lookie: Characters remaining: 3,333

January 7, 2009

Author's Response:

Animation/Drawing: The amount of time spent drawing frames depends on how motivated I am and how clear of a picture I have in my head. For frame by frame, yes.. you have to re-draw everything. That's why a graphic tablet helps. (wacom bamboo fun)

Music: There's tons of rap artists out there. Check out a username that goes by the name of Lejin.

Length: The song is longer.. there's a link on the top left to the whole song. I made the animation this length because the program started to lag after 1,000 frames.

glad you liked it dude

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Score: 9

"Nice! :D"

submission: Hay Wars

date: January 6, 2009

Great job mang!

--Sorry about the delay with the review. :(--

Animation: None, it's real life! For a real show with real people this is pretty good!
Sooo....
Movie/acting: Pretty good, yes. I kinda lol'd when the cam zoomed out and it showed you two were just fighting behind hay 3 feet away from eachother! lol
I never liked star wars, but this is pretty good!

Plot: Pretty good. Kinda short, but it's still good. Verry "dramatic" when you guys put the guns to eachother's heads! Although, because your gun was in the blonde guy's mouth, it was hard to understand him. That camera guy shoulda kept his big mouth shut! He got shot! >:D

Effort: Ya did ok with that.. coulda been longer, coulda had more lines or more conflict.

Woah, I'm starting to get busy now, I'd better go lay down.

btw: I don't see Corky's opponent getting hit! Only Croky!

Overall:
5/5 ; 9/10
~darknessdweller

January 7, 2009

Author's Response:

There is some animation. I mean the lasers weren't really there. ;) So yeah the lasers were animated.

The Hay seen was thought up by Nick's brother. It was a great idea.

I know this is kind of short, but we just made a new one. We haven't submitted it yet, but we are guessing it's going to take 3 movies to get it all on newgrounds. That will be longer for you.

The new one has many more lines, has a plot, more actors, comedy, dying, etc...

Thanks for the review.

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Score: 8

"Great tutorial!"

submission: The HTML Tutorial

date: December 31, 2008

Only one question!
How do I get this HTML document onto my own webpage on the web? Liek with a http://www. and what-not?

December 31, 2008

Author's Response:

You would have to get a hosting account from Go-Daddy or any other host. You need a server as well like a patche.

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Score: 10

"L0L"

submission: Stick & Dot eps. 1

date: December 29, 2008

I lol'd!

This is so stupid!
Yet it's funny!
PLZ DO MAKE MORE! XD

5/5 ; 10/10
~darknessdweller

December 29, 2008

Author's Response:

^_^

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Score: 6

"short flash"

submission: Precious Little Chicken

date: December 28, 2008

Got some comments.
Have you really been around this long?

And that poor old woman! She wanted to pet the cute little chicken, so the chicken kills her! Wow, NG is just full of flashes with unexpected kills, and twists to the plot.

Ain't it grand? :D
And today is my birthday! XD Just thought I'd tell ya

Overall:
4/5 ; 6/10
~darknessdweller

December 28, 2008